Thursday, February 7, 2013

Hey, what are you doing?  Put that down.  You gonna hurt yourself.  No, no, I said to the left.  That boy's about as sharp as a bowling ball.  Hey, pull my finger.  Go clean your room.  Go do your homework.  Do it and die boy.  She doesn't hate you, she just views you as a lower life form.  Wow, that looked like it really hurt.  You might want to stand back a bit.  Did you hear that?  That's a riot!  Hey, how was school?  Go take that mangy dog out!  Yeah, whatever.  Get down here!  You are totally your moms son!  Where's that brother of yours?  What did she say?

1 comment:

  1. This is good. I can see the imagery in it while reading it because of your word choice. I'm not sure if I see a plot twist at the end though? Maybe it's just confusing for me.

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